April 26- Falling in love with the bartender
A bad choice. To begin with, he wasn't really a bartender, just filling in, but the vest confused her, alluded to more expensive ink, thicker poems, words as marbled as corned beef. A simple item of...
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And how! I love this: the vest confused her, alluded to more expensive ink, thicker poems, words as marbled as corned beef. And he wasn't even the real bartender! And the quilt!! This is like a...
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The vest, the corned beef, the bruise colored shadows, the quilt --all add up to fantastic writing!Poor what's-her-name
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Ouch. This is really good: the vest confused her, alluded to more expensive ink, thicker poems, words
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I love it Judy. Chris is right about the Carveresque feel (or is that more properly a Gordon Lish feel?*). I had a rush of deja vu when I started reading this — the first two stanzas. Have you written...
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He must have been very cute, because he had precious little else going for him. Wow is right! Making the wrong choices based on such scanty evidence, a vest that means so much more to the N than a...
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OMG, yes, those shadows. Bruise-colored. Portending so much more to the story, so much sadness we know she's in for.
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Wow: but the vest confused her, alluded to more expensive ink, thicker poems, words as marbled as corned beef. Incredible imagery throughout. In awe again.
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The marbled words and bruise- colored shadows are splendid!
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Judy, I saw this last night, but ran out of on-line time (we must try to respect house rules, no?) and came back to it today. I'm glad I returned. I really like as marbled as corned beef. Also the...
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erotic as cigarette smokerising. who gave you these lines? amazing!
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